Who Am I?
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I really enjoyed this.  I like the duality expressed.  I'm not sure if this is supposed to be written from the vantage point of a human or a supernatural force. But for me, it resonated. I often feel weak and then resilient, depressed (death) and then fiercely alive.  Thank you for sharing!

(03-30-2016, 12:54 PM)jmmc137 Wrote:  I play both roles.
   I am death and dark,
   I am life and light,

I burn, I build, I blind,
   I clarify, I am doubt,
   I burst with courage,

I call you ugly, I kiss you
   goodnight, I lie to
   myself, I love myself,
   I bury myself, but I
   rise as well.



A ten minute freewrite! Critiques, comments, improvements?
"If you cannot be a poet, be the poem." - David Carradine
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Who Am I? - by jmmc137 - 03-30-2016, 12:54 PM
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RE: Who Am I? - by ellajam - 03-31-2016, 02:15 AM
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