09-11-2016, 02:49 PM
I really enjoyed this. I like the duality expressed. I'm not sure if this is supposed to be written from the vantage point of a human or a supernatural force. But for me, it resonated. I often feel weak and then resilient, depressed (death) and then fiercely alive. Thank you for sharing!
(03-30-2016, 12:54 PM)jmmc137 Wrote: I play both roles.
I am death and dark,
I am life and light,
I burn, I build, I blind,
I clarify, I am doubt,
I burst with courage,
I call you ugly, I kiss you
goodnight, I lie to
myself, I love myself,
I bury myself, but I
rise as well.
A ten minute freewrite! Critiques, comments, improvements?
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