The New Paranoia

The New Paranoia

GoingGently
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09-11-2016, 01:01 PM

I like the staccato in the short lines. You bring up subjects that make you think, "oh!" to yourself.

The way I read the poem it seemed anxious, in a good way.

I would try to exploit this feeling, make the reader feel the way the writer felt with miss Longfellow.

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