A key in the door

[Keith]

I really enjoy poems about nature. This poem is alive and visible in my head. I love the idea of a "tangerine sun" warming the fruits of nature.
I did have a problem with "half tasered tiger" as it seemed too violent for the soft ethereal feel of the piece.  ><

Sorry I missed your post D.Myst, thanks for the encouragement, I think I need to let this one sit a while before I go back again. One of the problems with this poem is that it was written for a challenge trying to fit in 5 words...Taser Tangerine etc I only really stuck with it because of slipping like otters which I think deserves to find a better place and maybe in another poem. Thanks again Keith