McKinley Road

[kolemath]

captivating. i can't stop reading it. maybe some comments will help me.

MCKINLEY ROAD the title doesn't help me with the interpretation, and since it's in line 1..

On McKinley Road, the devil
waits for me with eyes
and legs open, ready to devour i love all the references to body parts
what should first be fried fried is a little confusing but does allude to raw flesh

on the asphalt. Your glossy i like the enjambment as far as this line goes but its connection to the previous is confusing..frying on the street? i guess its about ambivalence 
screen, your glassy green great sounds
(but artificial) eyes, so someone is staring at the phone all the time?
your burnt to beauty skin --

somehow, the joy of finding you
alive summons lightning
that strikes the golden shower tree
from which I hang. How the blue really great stanza; love all the symbolism

sounds like hounds. How the priest
dipped us in the Jordan to our death i see blue connect when i read jordan; i still don't get blue though; maybe i get blue if i remember the monkey swinging tree
knowing that gills should sprout awesome
from our necks. How we rest. awesome