09-08-2016, 01:32 PM
I'm trying to find a deeper meaning (whatever that means) to the first line, but I can't. A joint is a joint, and dropping it, of all things, is about as stupid as it gets. So that somehow, although on the first read the first line drew me in, on all the later reads it just felt like a drag. Although perhaps the car is already hit, as the joint smokes -- but I don't think the lines' progressing tenses suggest that.