09-06-2016, 03:30 AM
This poem is lacking something. The theme carries, obviously. It seems flimsy though. If you could add some texture, some richness of thought or sound.
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Write Myself
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Write Myself - by Alic Elliot - 09-05-2016, 12:46 PM
RE: Write Myself - by rowens - 09-06-2016, 03:30 AM
RE: Write Myself - by Lizzie - 09-06-2016, 04:25 PM
RE: Write Myself - by RiverNotch - 09-06-2016, 06:31 PM
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