09-06-2016, 02:30 AM
(09-05-2016, 08:59 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: I suppose it depends. There's a bit of rhythm here, but mostly I'm enjoying this because I'm imagining it's the Royal Tart Toter reciting this.Oh man, that's hilarious!
(09-05-2016, 08:00 PM)Achebe Wrote: I think in nonsense verse you need to have some sort of rhythm or rhyme as extra compensation for the lack of sense. Otherwise, it fails to hold the reader's interest.I hear what you're saying. This was written in the style of Erik Blagsvedt, a pretty amazing abstract poet.

