09-05-2016, 12:40 AM 
	
	
	(06-08-2016, 07:20 AM)Slix343 Wrote: "It was no surprise that Gurash the Brash could not slay the dragon.The title brought me in, but the poem itself didn't bring much more to the table. Short ain't bad. But if it's shorter, it also needs to be more compact, and less redundant. That being said, It gave me a good laugh before I remembered I was in public.
Though it was a surprise that finally, the dragon managed to slay Gurash the Brash."

 

 
