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09-02-2016, 04:53 PM
I love the contemplative nature of the work. I had an instant problem with the use of "delectable" however...it just does not seem to fit, nor does "Bland" though it is a rewarding presence given its element of surprise. I wanted more imagery of this land....I wanted more feelings in how the beliefs were not true. It almost seems forlorn and cynical in some areas. The mood is definitely powerful...I would just work on more communicative imagery instead of words
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