09-02-2016, 07:58 AM
(09-02-2016, 07:45 AM)just mercedes Wrote:probably unnecessary, i am novice, i also use numbers in everything somehow or other. i just used them here to show my only issue with the poem, which must have been proper placement for pantoum. i would break the rules for symmetry in this case(09-02-2016, 07:06 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:(09-02-2016, 06:44 AM)just mercedes Wrote: What are all those numbers?locations, 11 block one line one, 51 block 5 line 1, i really gotta work on my critiquing skills
This is a pantoum, isn't it? The numbers are unnecessary, surely? I've never seen anyone use them on poetry, but I've only been writing for ten years.
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