09-02-2016, 07:45 AM
(09-02-2016, 07:06 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:(09-02-2016, 06:44 AM)just mercedes Wrote:locations, 11 block one line one, 51 block 5 line 1, i really gotta work on my critiquing skills(09-02-2016, 06:38 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote: This is my kind of poetry, i wrote the whole thing out, love the pattern. However, and Im sure you know this, the last block is backwards. Except for the fact that it reads better, I want the fourth block to be backwards too and maybe even make the third block entirely out of pattern free standing. Just because
What are all those numbers?
This is a pantoum, isn't it? The numbers are unnecessary, surely? I've never seen anyone use them on poetry, but I've only been writing for ten years.