09-02-2016, 06:38 AM
This is my kind of poetry, i wrote the whole thing out, love the pattern. However, and Im sure you know this, the last block is backwards. Except for the fact that it reads better, I want the fourth block to be backwards too and maybe even make the third block entirely out of pattern free standing. Just because
(09-02-2016, 05:31 AM)artjewl Wrote: Paperwhite
11 Baby's breath on my chest 11
12 rests. The blooms rise, fall, echo 12
13 the hush in the wake of a soul 13
14 stripped bare. Time does not 14
21 rest, but blooms, rises, falls, echos 12
22 hours, days, eternal moments 22
23 stripped bare. Time does not 14
24 care but dances through tears. 24
31 Our days are eternal moments. 22
32 Yesterday I buried my sons 32
33 and cares while dancing through tears 24
34 in the fabric of horizons. 34
41 Yesterday I buried my sons 32
42 under tigerlilies. But now I find, 42
43 in the fabric of horizons, 34
44 an answered prayer, quiet 44
51 under tigerlilies. Now I find, 42
52 in the hush of a wakeful soul, 13
53 an answered prayer, quiet 44
54 as Baby's breath on my chest. 11 !!!!! broke my brain
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