Father, Have I Sinned?

[crimsonqueen]

If you already think the poem is perfect and if you're going to continue to justify and explain every. little. thing. then you're not serious about editing your work and receiving feedback with anything resembling grace.

You're wasting everyone's time.

That's a bit unwarranted. It's called discourse. Someone makes a critique and I counter it by sharing my thought process..then they're welcome to point out the error in my thought process.

If I were to blindly accept criticism THEN this would be pointless. That said, their criticism has definitely been helpful so far..and as far as I can see you only really dropped by to speculate. Which is the true waste of everyone's time.

What's hilarious, too, is how multiple people have said I'm not prepared to accept criticism when I already posted a sample edit based on the criticism I received...y'all are lame.