Father, Have I Sinned?

Father, Have I Sinned?

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#10

09-01-2016, 04:35 AM

If you already think the poem is perfect and if you're going to continue to justify and explain every. little. thing. then you're not serious about editing your work and receiving feedback with anything resembling grace.

You're wasting everyone's time.

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Father, Have I Sinned? - by crimsonqueen - 08-31-2016, 12:05 AM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by 71degrees - 08-31-2016, 11:06 AM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by crimsonqueen - 08-31-2016, 12:29 PM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by makeshift - 08-31-2016, 01:14 PM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by crimsonqueen - 08-31-2016, 07:33 PM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by 71degrees - 09-01-2016, 03:16 AM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by Achebe - 08-31-2016, 01:48 PM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by rowens - 08-31-2016, 10:01 PM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by crimsonqueen - 09-01-2016, 04:04 AM

RE: Father, Have I Sinned? - by 71degrees - 09-02-2016, 03:50 AM