08-31-2016, 07:07 AM
(06-09-2016, 06:41 AM)mitsuch Wrote: TrueReading this i often felt myself confused about what all the imagery was trying to convey.
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We stand in this delectable land,
a casing, enveloping truth.
We live in a world sightless,
our faint ideas of the world. This doesn't make a lot of sense. The use of the word "world" so close together makes this line sound garbled. This line awkwardly comes of the tongue.
A false belief is delivered,
a love that leaves us bland
a complex matrix of man,
a cloak over sincerity.
An embrace, that fixates,
an untrue fleeting grace.
We lie at the mercy of us,
As we let ourselves into the embrace. I think this word embrace is being used too close to each other.
