08-27-2016, 12:16 PM
Odd... coming to this at version 1.02, read it as irony and it worked very well in that (unintended) context. Even a hint of emptiness seemed present at the very last. Lovely work, to be so fine even when misread.
Which is, I suppose, to say (in serious workshopping) that it's now so smooth the rejection can be missed by the uninformed and liberation misinterpreted as loss denied. Problem?
Which is, I suppose, to say (in serious workshopping) that it's now so smooth the rejection can be missed by the uninformed and liberation misinterpreted as loss denied. Problem?
Non-practicing atheist