She Stands Staring into the Water
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Hey, Useless!

Thanks for the feedback. I'll give some more thought to the opening line and the closing ones too. It distresses me that it was a little light on the emotion side Confused I hope I can remedy that.

Thanks again! Big Grin

lizziep
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Messages In This Thread
She Stands Staring into the Water - by Lizzie - 08-18-2016, 02:34 PM
RE: She Stands Staring into the Water - by Achebe - 08-18-2016, 07:19 PM
RE: She Stands Staring into the Water - by Lizzie - 08-18-2016, 07:28 PM
RE: She Stands Staring into the Water - by Wjames - 08-18-2016, 11:57 PM
RE: She Stands Staring into the Water - by Lizzie - 08-19-2016, 04:43 PM
RE: She Stands Staring into the Water - by Lizzie - 08-22-2016, 01:21 AM



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