reptilian ennui

[Achebe]

thanks ella , always glad to get your comments.

achebe - haiku is NOT about 575, it is an observation of the world in as few words as possible. I like to bring a little humor into them. thanks for counting , I never do.

I know that English haiku is not about 5 7 5.
My point, which should have been clear from my post, was that IF you were attempting haiku, you should observe, not comment, in your poem.
Otherwise, this is a haiku too:
She sells
Sea shells
On seashores.