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Impossible angel
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08-17-2016, 08:14 PM
(08-15-2016, 02:40 PM)Vanity Wrote: Ok, I friggin loved this. First stanza got me. I loved the repetition of 'not to me' it seemed to hold its weight ...I'm not going to say much else, because there isn't...anything I'd change. It also seems to be one of those poems of 'perfect length '...not too long, nor too short....just rightthanks, Vanity  glad you liked it.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Impossible angel - by Achebe - 07-15-2016, 06:59 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Lizzie - 07-16-2016, 11:42 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by kolemath - 07-17-2016, 01:05 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 07-17-2016, 07:24 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by amejadcc - 07-28-2016, 12:21 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by RiverNotch - 07-28-2016, 11:49 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 08-06-2016, 10:01 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Vanity - 08-15-2016, 02:40 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 08-17-2016, 08:14 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by artjewl - 08-30-2016, 11:25 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by nikkisto - 08-31-2016, 04:16 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by IgorSShute - 09-14-2016, 03:29 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 09-14-2016, 07:09 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by rollingbrianjones - 10-07-2016, 09:59 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by RC James - 10-07-2016, 01:05 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 10-15-2016, 09:58 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by just mercedes - 10-15-2016, 11:10 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by zorcas - 10-20-2016, 01:04 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 10-20-2016, 05:11 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by tectak - 11-05-2016, 09:24 PM
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