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Effie and Jim
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08-16-2016, 08:16 PM
Hi, Merc, yes to this scene. Cowers away is odd as for me cowers implies a cautious pulling away, possibly cowers under, reinforcing her shrinkage. Thanks for the read.
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Effie and Jim - by just mercedes - 08-16-2016, 05:52 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by ellajam - 08-16-2016, 08:16 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by just mercedes - 08-16-2016, 09:06 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by ellajam - 08-16-2016, 09:10 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by just mercedes - 08-16-2016, 09:21 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by billy - 08-16-2016, 08:22 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by Quixilated - 08-16-2016, 09:45 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by just mercedes - 08-16-2016, 10:52 PM
RE: Effie and Jim - by Wjames - 08-18-2016, 03:23 AM
RE: Effie and Jim - by just mercedes - 09-03-2016, 08:29 AM
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