08-16-2016, 11:41 AM
What a fortnight, what a fortnight! Enrollment and first week of class has really robbed me of my time -- but now, I respond! I do agree that although the rhythm is nice, the images are a bit disjoint, and the commentary doesn't bring anything new to the table. I'm quite new at commenting on politics, at least when lines and images are involved, so the inconsistency. But perhaps clearer knowledge of the subject would make things gel more?
http://newsinfo.inquirer.net/794598/kill...gs-duterte
His campaign promised that in six months, drug crime would be practically eradicated, so the title, and the Macbeth reference at the end. Hmm....perhaps I can further clarify this point by adding to that whole "Jezebel" line?
And more specifically on the Death Star's part (ooh, Rogue One is coming out soon!): I'm not sure about having overdone the wolves and the lambs bit, since although it's continued in the next whole of the sentence, the focus is really not on them being wolves and lambs anymore. Ending on "love"does make things a bit, well, not tired, but silly -- while I massively disagree that cocksucking makes my whole point moot, since I'm not a square (and since the rough-hewn metaphor works, and the image draws eyes in). xP
Many, many thanks on the responses!
http://newsinfo.inquirer.net/794598/kill...gs-duterte
His campaign promised that in six months, drug crime would be practically eradicated, so the title, and the Macbeth reference at the end. Hmm....perhaps I can further clarify this point by adding to that whole "Jezebel" line?
And more specifically on the Death Star's part (ooh, Rogue One is coming out soon!): I'm not sure about having overdone the wolves and the lambs bit, since although it's continued in the next whole of the sentence, the focus is really not on them being wolves and lambs anymore. Ending on "love"does make things a bit, well, not tired, but silly -- while I massively disagree that cocksucking makes my whole point moot, since I'm not a square (and since the rough-hewn metaphor works, and the image draws eyes in). xP
Many, many thanks on the responses!