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Impossible angel
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08-15-2016, 02:40 PM
Ok, I friggin loved this. First stanza got me. I loved the repetition of 'not to me' it seemed to hold its weight ...I'm not going to say much else, because there isn't...anything I'd change. It also seems to be one of those poems of 'perfect length '...not too long, nor too short....just right
(-: V "Why do you suppose we only feel compelled to chase the ones who run away?" -Vicomte de Valmont, Dangerous Liasons |
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Impossible angel - by Achebe - 07-15-2016, 06:59 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Lizzie - 07-16-2016, 11:42 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by kolemath - 07-17-2016, 01:05 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 07-17-2016, 07:24 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by amejadcc - 07-28-2016, 12:21 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by RiverNotch - 07-28-2016, 11:49 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 08-06-2016, 10:01 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Vanity - 08-15-2016, 02:40 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 08-17-2016, 08:14 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by artjewl - 08-30-2016, 11:25 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by nikkisto - 08-31-2016, 04:16 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by IgorSShute - 09-14-2016, 03:29 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 09-14-2016, 07:09 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by rollingbrianjones - 10-07-2016, 09:59 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by RC James - 10-07-2016, 01:05 PM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 10-15-2016, 09:58 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by just mercedes - 10-15-2016, 11:10 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by zorcas - 10-20-2016, 01:04 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by Achebe - 10-20-2016, 05:11 AM
RE: Impossible angel - by tectak - 11-05-2016, 09:24 PM
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