08-15-2016, 06:14 AM
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The line "used to come and take me" suggests the poet needs to develop more economical use of words: "used to come" is wholly useless, and learning what she bought for the poet so mundane and unremarkable except for not capping Coke that it reminds of "Routines" discussed not far away which also trod infertile ground.
The line "used to come and take me" suggests the poet needs to develop more economical use of words: "used to come" is wholly useless, and learning what she bought for the poet so mundane and unremarkable except for not capping Coke that it reminds of "Routines" discussed not far away which also trod infertile ground.