08-14-2016, 09:34 PM
(08-14-2016, 06:59 PM)lizziep Wrote: I like the exact rhymes at the ends of many of your line and how the poem starts out with 3 again's and recapitulates the three again toward the end. Gives a great sense of closure to it.Thanks
And, very funnyI want to share it with my friends, but that's against the rules.
Alas, it's all fun and games until November arrives. We shall see.
Feel free to share - I'm only possessive about my mawkish little sad poems, not the ones that - at least try to be - funny
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe


I want to share it with my friends, but that's against the rules.