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He Said Six Months
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08-13-2016, 06:24 AM
I'm a fan of the mood on this one. Its refreshing to read something more concerning to feelings and emotion, instead of perfect syntax and language we rarely use. The way the rhythm and beat of lines were disjointed added to the illusion of a rhyming commentary. Thank you for your share.
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He Said Six Months - by RiverNotch - 08-02-2016, 11:16 PM
RE: He Said Six Months - by kolemath - 08-04-2016, 08:31 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by QDeathstar - 08-04-2016, 11:20 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by comandoartjunky - 08-13-2016, 01:47 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by PenandPaper - 08-13-2016, 06:24 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by RiverNotch - 08-16-2016, 11:41 AM
RE: He Said Six Months - by Tiptoethroughthetulips - 08-24-2016, 01:20 AM
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