08-11-2016, 09:53 PM
Don't have any specific crit, sorry. But just wanted to say that I admire the range that you're attempting in your work.
And no, I'm not saying this to be nice just because I opened a 'Hysteria' thread in the Arse.
I like how this piece is so different from 'Skeletons', but still has a nice, rhythmic quality to it, while keeping to a pretty complicated rhyme scheme.
I'll try to provide more specific feedback later if I can manage.
And no, I'm not saying this to be nice just because I opened a 'Hysteria' thread in the Arse.
I like how this piece is so different from 'Skeletons', but still has a nice, rhythmic quality to it, while keeping to a pretty complicated rhyme scheme.
I'll try to provide more specific feedback later if I can manage.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe