08-06-2016, 02:04 PM
Edit 1.
Salt Lines
Carriage jungle shudders
carry offending souls wayward
touched on to stale eye flickers,
close vacancy, loose cares.
Unwashed men in sweat salt
caps consider the white
light lies of thumbed palms,
dumbed psalms of
daily deliverance.
Un-held sways distract headlight
plays to that sound: rhinestone brakes
Routine sits considered among his
friends Numb and Bedrock.
no words worth utter, no pleasantries.
they remained, to lacerate.
Unshaken by crack white slaves
or ignorant children of infants.
They stand, statue to like of concern
or played apathy to road line,
not interest, least curious.
Carriage jungle shudders
assume rights to passage,
but that gutter fakes folly as
Routine holds that pass of clean air.
Blackbirds
murdered for drama-less plays.
End-of-line stupor would dupe her,
heavy as strangled minds tore tangled vine.
let them off at the next
last stop.
Salt Lines (Original)
Carriage jungle shudders
carry offending souls wayward
touched on to stale eye flickers,
close vacancy, loose cares.
unwashed men in sweat salt
caps consider the white
light lies of thumbed palms,
dumbed psalms of
daily deliverance.
un held sways distract headlight
plays to that sound. rhinestone brakes.
Routine sat considered among his
friends Numb and Bedrock.
no words worth utter, no pleasantries.
they remained, to lacerate.
unshaken by crack white slaves
or ignorant children of infants.
they stood, statue to like of concern
or played apathy to road line,
not interest, least curious.
Carriage jungle shudders
assume rights to passage,
but that gutter, fakes folly as
Routine clung to clean air.
blackbirds
murdered for drama-less plays.
end-of-line stupor would dupe her,
heavy to strangled mind from tangled vine.
let me off at the next
last stop.
Salt Lines
Carriage jungle shudders
carry offending souls wayward
touched on to stale eye flickers,
close vacancy, loose cares.
Unwashed men in sweat salt
caps consider the white
light lies of thumbed palms,
dumbed psalms of
daily deliverance.
Un-held sways distract headlight
plays to that sound: rhinestone brakes
Routine sits considered among his
friends Numb and Bedrock.
no words worth utter, no pleasantries.
they remained, to lacerate.
Unshaken by crack white slaves
or ignorant children of infants.
They stand, statue to like of concern
or played apathy to road line,
not interest, least curious.
Carriage jungle shudders
assume rights to passage,
but that gutter fakes folly as
Routine holds that pass of clean air.
Blackbirds
murdered for drama-less plays.
End-of-line stupor would dupe her,
heavy as strangled minds tore tangled vine.
let them off at the next
last stop.
Salt Lines (Original)
Carriage jungle shudders
carry offending souls wayward
touched on to stale eye flickers,
close vacancy, loose cares.
unwashed men in sweat salt
caps consider the white
light lies of thumbed palms,
dumbed psalms of
daily deliverance.
un held sways distract headlight
plays to that sound. rhinestone brakes.
Routine sat considered among his
friends Numb and Bedrock.
no words worth utter, no pleasantries.
they remained, to lacerate.
unshaken by crack white slaves
or ignorant children of infants.
they stood, statue to like of concern
or played apathy to road line,
not interest, least curious.
Carriage jungle shudders
assume rights to passage,
but that gutter, fakes folly as
Routine clung to clean air.
blackbirds
murdered for drama-less plays.
end-of-line stupor would dupe her,
heavy to strangled mind from tangled vine.
let me off at the next
last stop.