08-06-2016, 10:01 AM
@ameja, kole, Lizziep and RN - thanks for your inputs.
@kole - yes, the images are disjointed. I got away with it once, as Basil Fawlty said...but evidently I did not. I'll think about whether I can find some way of getting sense back into the pome.
@ lizziep and @RN - just wanted to say thanks for your feedback. I'll get back to this piece at a later date when I've some time on my hands. Just extremely tied up at the moment, but didn't want you to think that I was ignoring your inputs. Ciao!
@kole - yes, the images are disjointed. I got away with it once, as Basil Fawlty said...but evidently I did not. I'll think about whether I can find some way of getting sense back into the pome.
@ lizziep and @RN - just wanted to say thanks for your feedback. I'll get back to this piece at a later date when I've some time on my hands. Just extremely tied up at the moment, but didn't want you to think that I was ignoring your inputs. Ciao!
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe