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Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing
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08-04-2016, 10:40 AM
I know I had issues with the last line, but I think you traded something with oomph and humor for something that means nothing to me. Sorry if I misled you, I know you can do better. Keep at it.
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Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by kolemath - 07-27-2016, 09:17 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by ellajam - 07-27-2016, 08:26 PM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by kolemath - 08-03-2016, 09:36 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by ellajam - 08-03-2016, 10:51 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by just mercedes - 08-03-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by ellajam - 08-04-2016, 10:40 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by Achebe - 08-06-2016, 03:40 PM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by sapril - 08-08-2016, 02:37 PM
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