08-03-2016, 10:51 AM
Tough one. Drew, roped and hooked all have weaving overtones, one of them might work. Sucked into has babe ovetones.
Or maybe you can keep hustle and add a bit to L1 for some balance, either "the volcano" or something before "below", shuttling below, ha, only kidding. Good luck and happy poem poking.
Or maybe you can keep hustle and add a bit to L1 for some balance, either "the volcano" or something before "below", shuttling below, ha, only kidding. Good luck and happy poem poking.
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