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Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing
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08-03-2016, 09:36 AM
Thanks for the critique, ellajam! I'm happy to have your feedback on a poem and have considered your comments for a revision.
The pages of my thesaurus are weary having been torn apart looking for a good synonym for hustle. I just couldn't find one to satisfy the poem. Cheers!
Thanks to this Forum
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Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by kolemath - 07-27-2016, 09:17 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by ellajam - 07-27-2016, 08:26 PM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by kolemath - 08-03-2016, 09:36 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by ellajam - 08-03-2016, 10:51 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by just mercedes - 08-03-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by ellajam - 08-04-2016, 10:40 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by Achebe - 08-06-2016, 03:40 PM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by sapril - 08-08-2016, 02:37 PM
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