08-01-2016, 04:02 AM
(07-23-2016, 06:38 AM)Leanne Wrote: If I had a heart, said the kitten, said the cat,I was going to say what Billy said - that your poem reminds me of the Chesire cat in Alice in Wonderland. Very fantastical language; it evokes imagery of a fantasy world and takes me into the world of the unknown, so to speak. Great job -- AND I love the rhyme scheme!
it would float like a bubble, fancy that.
It could ride like a ribbon in the hair of a queen,
quite as hard as a winter but in soft velveteen,
and all other hearts would be base and obscene
-- but I don’t, said the kitten, said the cat.
~blue

