Happiness won't take turns -- edit 1

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Happiness won't take turns -- edit 1

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07-29-2016, 05:17 AM

Hello all

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New version is up. I'd love any thoughts on it.

RN: I tried to work on the possessives problem. What do you think?

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Happiness won't take turns -- edit 1 - by Lizzie - 07-03-2016, 11:09 AM

RE: Happiness won't take turns - by dukealien - 07-03-2016, 11:22 AM

RE: Happiness won't take turns - by Lizzie - 07-05-2016, 03:10 AM

RE: Happiness won't take turns - by Vanity - 07-03-2016, 04:11 PM

RE: Happiness won't take turns - by Erthona - 07-04-2016, 12:52 PM

RE: Happiness won't take turns - by RiverNotch - 07-04-2016, 03:57 PM

RE: Happiness won't take turns - by Lizzie - 07-07-2016, 09:22 AM

RE: Happiness won't take turns - by RiverNotch - 07-07-2016, 03:22 PM

RE: Happiness won't take turns -- edit 1 - by Lizzie - 07-29-2016, 05:17 AM

RE: Happiness won't take turns -- edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 07-30-2016, 01:01 PM

RE: Happiness won't take turns -- edit 1 - by Lizzie - 07-30-2016, 03:29 PM

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