07-29-2016, 01:55 AM
thanks!
@Pdeathstar: i'll keep that note on the preface in mind. where, these typos? and if my punctuation choices were wrong -- especially unsure about the list in the middle.
@lizziep: not quite getting what you meant on "final". i've also ended up agreeing that what she saw before is unclear, and she probably won't get it, either -- starting to think of gutting it. also, i'll keep that note in mind, hehe.
@kolemath: oh, for that capitalization thing, i'm not too sure: it feels like an invention too English for a more Jewish/Grecian God. but I will think about it.
for the suha fruit, i was trying to keep with the image of the foundations of heaven in revelation, the one where there's twelve stones, and them fruits do look like really big, well, stones.
but then you got what "this" is, so perhaps i don't need to change it -- have to reaaaallly think about that. and she hasn't passed yet, but she's got acute leukemia that's already well spread, and she's old, and she doesn't want treatment anymore.
again, many thanks!
@Pdeathstar: i'll keep that note on the preface in mind. where, these typos? and if my punctuation choices were wrong -- especially unsure about the list in the middle.
@lizziep: not quite getting what you meant on "final". i've also ended up agreeing that what she saw before is unclear, and she probably won't get it, either -- starting to think of gutting it. also, i'll keep that note in mind, hehe.
@kolemath: oh, for that capitalization thing, i'm not too sure: it feels like an invention too English for a more Jewish/Grecian God. but I will think about it.
for the suha fruit, i was trying to keep with the image of the foundations of heaven in revelation, the one where there's twelve stones, and them fruits do look like really big, well, stones.
but then you got what "this" is, so perhaps i don't need to change it -- have to reaaaallly think about that. and she hasn't passed yet, but she's got acute leukemia that's already well spread, and she's old, and she doesn't want treatment anymore.
again, many thanks!