A Timely Passing

[QDeathstar]

Hi, I think the preface makes the poem stronger, and although it was meant as not part of the poem, personally I'd keep it if you were showing it anywhere else aside from the addressee, ofc.


This middle stanza is very strong. In the third stanza, I was trying to figure of what she had seen before? Her death, death, it's not clear...

There are also a few typos