The Original Narcissist

[QDeathstar]

I think you can drop life from the title, you mention it in the poem already, plus I think dropping life would make the poem more intriguing .Unfortunately, I thought this was a poem about black/blue/donkey live's matter, so I am a bit dissapointed. It's still a nice poem, but not what I was looking for.


By calling life a narcissist, you are implying a negative connotation, however I don't get that from the poem.