Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing
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Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing
 
Below volcano San Pedro
a Mayan master weaver hustled you
 
into her dusty blanket shelter
revealing woven Quetzal suns, embroideries of moons and flowers.
 
In Tz’utujil, Spanish, English her finger crooked
toward a blanket swing, hung from nearby trees.
 
“It fits two.”
Si ella sea pequeñita.”
 
You punched my arm

and pointed toward the one with green and blue.



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Below volcano San Pedro
a Mayan master weaver hustled you
 
into her dusty blanket shelter on the street
to woven Quetzal suns, embroideries of moon and flower.
 
In Tz’utujil, Spanish, English her finger crooked
toward a blanket swing, hung from nearby trees.
 
“It fits two.”
Si ella sea pequeñita.”
 
You punched my arm
and slapped my laughing chin.
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Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by kolemath - 07-27-2016, 09:17 AM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by just mercedes - 08-03-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Our Daughters in the Backyard Swing - by sapril - 08-08-2016, 02:37 PM



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