Mused
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(07-24-2016, 08:53 PM)next Wrote:  
(07-24-2016, 06:18 PM)just mercedes Wrote:  I love it. You deny the existence of sirens and muses, yet the Fates escape that fate. I like the turn,
and I'm left wondering who 'you' is. The last three lines feel almost supernatural.

I don't think she denied any existences. What part of 'there are no sirens, muses never sing' did I get wrong? The protagonist just didn't happen to be
near any sirenous islands, and muses are well known for letting their inspiree do the
singing (and suffer the consequences).  And the "you"?  I hope that's us.
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Messages In This Thread
Mused - by Leanne - 07-23-2016, 06:42 AM
RE: Mused - by billy - 07-23-2016, 06:52 AM
RE: Mused - by Leanne - 07-23-2016, 06:55 AM
RE: Mused - by next - 07-23-2016, 10:47 PM
RE: Mused - by Leanne - 07-24-2016, 06:11 AM
RE: Mused - by next - 07-24-2016, 03:39 PM
RE: Mused - by just mercedes - 07-24-2016, 06:18 PM
RE: Mused - by next - 07-24-2016, 08:53 PM
RE: Mused - by just mercedes - 07-25-2016, 05:06 AM
RE: Mused - by next - 07-25-2016, 11:42 AM
RE: Mused - by Leanne - 07-25-2016, 11:47 AM



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