07-24-2016, 08:53 PM
(07-24-2016, 06:18 PM)just mercedes Wrote: I love it. You deny the existence of sirens and muses, yet the Fates escape that fate. I like the turn,
and I'm left wondering who 'you' is. The last three lines feel almost supernatural.
I don't think she denied any existences. The protagonist just didn't happen to be
near any sirenous islands, and muses are well known for letting their inspiree do the
singing (and suffer the consequences). And the "you"? I hope that's us.

