07-21-2016, 06:54 AM
A few nits 
I'd like "she's a high priced lady"
Bette Davis, who's she?
I was thinking a Kardash but then thought Madonna strikes a pose, sort of halfway between in time, I still think someone more current would be better, maybe a non-kardash model.
S3L4 sow instead of so.
That was fun.
I'd like "she's a high priced lady"
Bette Davis, who's she?
I was thinking a Kardash but then thought Madonna strikes a pose, sort of halfway between in time, I still think someone more current would be better, maybe a non-kardash model.S3L4 sow instead of so.
That was fun.
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