07-20-2016, 11:49 AM
that's more senryu than haiku as it's of an abstraction and not an image.
i think your middle line proves the meaningless of the poem
i think your middle line proves the meaningless of the poem
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I Hate Haiku - by UselessBlueprint - 07-19-2016, 10:56 PM
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