I Hate Haiku
#5
that's more senryu than haiku as it's of an abstraction and not an image.

i think your middle line proves the meaningless of the poem Big Grin
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I Hate Haiku - by UselessBlueprint - 07-19-2016, 10:56 PM
RE: I Hate Haiku - by RiverNotch - 07-19-2016, 10:57 PM
RE: I Hate Haiku - by UselessBlueprint - 07-19-2016, 11:01 PM
RE: I Hate Haiku - by RiverNotch - 07-19-2016, 11:03 PM
RE: I Hate Haiku - by billy - 07-20-2016, 11:49 AM
RE: I Hate Haiku - by Leanne - 07-20-2016, 03:56 PM



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