07-19-2016, 02:48 AM
we expect a bit more feedback in the mild forum/mod
This poem is full of interesting imagery but seems to not quite get across what it's trying to say. In the last stanza I would remove "nearly" and maybe change "picks" to "picking"
This poem is full of interesting imagery but seems to not quite get across what it's trying to say. In the last stanza I would remove "nearly" and maybe change "picks" to "picking"