07-18-2016, 07:52 AM
The poem appears to be about hunting. If not, then the subject needs to be clearer.
But if it's about hunting, and it's not deer because of the simile, is it about hunting rabbits? Or actually about deer? The ambiguity is a distraction.
No idea where the water is coming from. The definite article implies prior reference but I don't see one here.
But if it's about hunting, and it's not deer because of the simile, is it about hunting rabbits? Or actually about deer? The ambiguity is a distraction.
No idea where the water is coming from. The definite article implies prior reference but I don't see one here.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe