Wafting

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Probably true. Thank you guys for the critical comments. I do enjoy writing something this easy, (the off-rhymes, descriptions, pacing, syllables aside). But that's probably what discourages me most when I submit such a thing. I'll correct it with more concrete, relatable, solid words that will engage the reader. Or at the very least, write about something in the real world. I'll keep the helpful comments in mind if I ever submit more in the future.