Wafting

[Achebe]

I was hesitant to submit something as nonconformist as this, but all in all, I wanted to see how something this different would survive here with my bias.

Hi blue - I don't mean to belittle or discourage you, but just to dispel you of the illusion that what you have posted here is 'nonconformist' and 'different'. The truth is that it's pretty easy to write something like this, and if most people don't do it it's for the same reason that most people wouldn't bother running a marathon over 2 days - there's just no point.
Since you're pretty clear that you won't 'change your style', the above remains my only feedback.