Travel Dream (new edit 2)

Travel Dream (new edit 2)

kolemath Offline

Senior Member

Posts: 229
Threads: 26
Joined: May 2016

07-17-2016, 02:04 AM

@JM Thanks for pointing out the lack of clarity with my verbs and subjects.

I feel like I'm still struggling with this one. The process with this one hasn't felt so natural.

Edit 2 posted!

Thanks to this Forum
feedback award

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by kolemath - 06-28-2016, 09:33 AM

RE: Travel Dream - by UselessBlueprint - 06-29-2016, 12:19 AM

RE: Travel Dream - by Wjames - 07-02-2016, 06:12 PM

RE: Travel Dream - by kolemath - 07-12-2016, 08:14 AM

RE: Travel Dream (edit1) - by just mercedes - 07-12-2016, 08:57 AM

RE: Travel Dream (edit2) - by kolemath - 07-17-2016, 02:04 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by cvanshelton - 07-17-2016, 05:59 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by Lizzie - 07-17-2016, 11:03 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by kolemath - 07-20-2016, 08:45 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by RiverNotch - 07-27-2016, 11:13 PM

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)

Login
Username:
Password:	Lost Password?
	Remember me