07-15-2016, 09:45 AM
I like the worth,birth, overcome lines, they are the crux of it, the rising, not the falling, or flailing, part of life is the interesting story.
I love the unscathed/grave almost rhyme. All in all sharp, an expression of what we think but can only voice to a true friend, who would love us for the "smack around the head with a kipper" when they were needing one.
I love the unscathed/grave almost rhyme. All in all sharp, an expression of what we think but can only voice to a true friend, who would love us for the "smack around the head with a kipper" when they were needing one.
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