In Memoriam

In Memoriam

Achebe Offline

The Fourth Stooge

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07-15-2016, 07:16 AM

The 'never twine' is lovely, as is the penultimate line.
L2 sounds a bit long to me...? 'Stone of Grecian' or something like that might fit the metre better, but I have Midas ears.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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In Memoriam - by Leanne - 07-15-2016, 05:27 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by NobodyNothing - 07-15-2016, 05:33 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by Achebe - 07-15-2016, 07:16 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by Erthona - 07-15-2016, 07:37 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by just mercedes - 07-15-2016, 07:37 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by shemthepenman - 07-15-2016, 07:59 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by Leanne - 07-15-2016, 08:40 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by just mercedes - 07-15-2016, 10:47 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by NobodyNothing - 07-15-2016, 12:43 PM

RE: In Memoriam - by ellajam - 07-15-2016, 10:28 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by Leanne - 07-16-2016, 06:08 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by Leanne - 07-16-2016, 06:53 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by shemthepenman - 07-16-2016, 09:54 AM

RE: In Memoriam - by NobodyNothing - 07-16-2016, 11:06 AM

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