07-15-2016, 04:30 AM
Quite right. Everyone dies -- it's the ones who are resurrected that people get really excited about. And then kill more people to see if they'll come back or not. I think I got side-tracked.
Because of its self-awareness, I am very happy to see "soul" used twice where usually I would cringe at a single appearance. I am a bit uncomfortable with "did overcome it", syntax-wise; I'm thinking something along the lines of "has overcome it" instead. I'll let "once were insane" slide but not without mentioning it...
Of course I am somewhat biased being, as you know, something of a cynic when it comes to the obsession with selfies both photographic and in copy. The odd vignette is fine, but a constant stream of #woeisme and #fml to the tune of #reallydeepTaylorSwiftsong does wear thin rather quickly. Swiftly.
Your final lines are perfect, like a smack around the head with a very sad kipper.
Because of its self-awareness, I am very happy to see "soul" used twice where usually I would cringe at a single appearance. I am a bit uncomfortable with "did overcome it", syntax-wise; I'm thinking something along the lines of "has overcome it" instead. I'll let "once were insane" slide but not without mentioning it...
Of course I am somewhat biased being, as you know, something of a cynic when it comes to the obsession with selfies both photographic and in copy. The odd vignette is fine, but a constant stream of #woeisme and #fml to the tune of #reallydeepTaylorSwiftsong does wear thin rather quickly. Swiftly.
Your final lines are perfect, like a smack around the head with a very sad kipper.
It could be worse