Travel Dream (new edit 2)

Travel Dream (new edit 2)

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07-12-2016, 08:14 AM

@UBP Your readings are always so helpful. I gutted this poem based on your critique. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but this one was a big challenge to edit. Thanks for your patience! Hope the second draft comes off more clearly.

@WJ Thanks for pointing out clarity issues. Your critique helped guide my revision, and I really appreciate your response!

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Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by kolemath - 06-28-2016, 09:33 AM

RE: Travel Dream - by UselessBlueprint - 06-29-2016, 12:19 AM

RE: Travel Dream - by Wjames - 07-02-2016, 06:12 PM

RE: Travel Dream - by kolemath - 07-12-2016, 08:14 AM

RE: Travel Dream (edit1) - by just mercedes - 07-12-2016, 08:57 AM

RE: Travel Dream (edit2) - by kolemath - 07-17-2016, 02:04 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by cvanshelton - 07-17-2016, 05:59 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by Lizzie - 07-17-2016, 11:03 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by kolemath - 07-20-2016, 08:45 AM

RE: Travel Dream (new edit 2) - by RiverNotch - 07-27-2016, 11:13 PM

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